O_O Goodness the poem and the picture are both soooo creepy! Yikes! XD Wow Fun-Chan you're so awesome at drawing creepy things! I could never do that. XP XD This is such a sad picture though...such a beautiful bride, so sad. =[ Well this is perfect for Halloween^^ Anyways, great job on the outline Fun-Chan, its fantastic! ^_^ Keep up the amazing work!

Also, happy late Halloween! XD I hope you had an awesome one! ^_^

;A;

STOP BEING SO AMAZING AT DRAWING/WRITING CREEPY THINGS.

Especially when I'm home... at night. WHEN DARKNESS IS HERE. <3

Really amazing poem and picture. It's so creepy and eerie, but AMAZING.

I like this version a bit more, for some reason. BUT I LOVE THEM BOTH TO BITS NO MATTER WHAT.

*never did a Halloween picture*

Wow, I was not expecting that. >.< But I still love it!!! it looks really great. I can't choose between this one and the one w/ shading. They both look really cool. [But I'm leaning a little towards the second] Amazing job like always. Wow you really are a good writer too. Fantastic!!

this is really really awesome
i love bothh versions
and the poem is kool
*hugs + favs* ^^

Tis amazing!!! I love it! It's sooo creppy and awesome.... lol I think it's way cool.
~Chero~

I like them both

very dark....
!!!i love it !!!!
*faves*

Wow! This is really cool! I love the inverse colors!

Hmmmmmm..... I personally like the second version better, but 'tis my opinion. Both look pretty wicked though~ >;3

"You may now kill the bride"
xD
The groom totally went Sweeney Todd on the bride. :OOOO

Good luck in the tournament, Fun-chan~! ♥
I'm sure you guys'll win if you just believeeeee~~ 8D

Awesome job, Fun-channnn~ ILU! :D

omg this is really good!
I love how you drew it, but I do like the shading on the other one better.
The poem is really good too! I like it, I can nevver write poems. xD
Ima-chan where do you get these ideas? xD
But I really do like the everything! ;D

good luck with your volleyball!
~Sophia

Good luck to you and your team in that Volleyball Tournament~!^ ^ Kick some butt! >8D

Ohmygoodness, this looks amazing~! =]
The bride looks really pretty and the groom er...well, we can't fully see him but, hey~ He still looks cool^ ^;
Definitely Halloween worthy~ *3* *bows to the picture for Halloween[even though Halloween is officially over for this year^ ^;;]*[I'm absolutely NOT Halloween worthy x-x]
Anyhow, awesome pic~!^3^*hugs*

Oh yea~~ and the second version is beautiful~ =] The colors are really pretty and it just brings out the picture~!^0^[Both versions are amazing]

this is so cool and amazing! i like both verisons that you made! maybe the second one more but idk. this is so awesome! amazing job!

OH NO
SHE'S GONNA DIEEE

I still have to make a halloween picture.... - u-;

this is freakin sweet! i was just watching Halloween the movie, and this pic reminded me of it! awesome job and have a Great Halloween!

fma17

I totally freaking love that poem and the pic
keep up the awesome sauce work FUN-chan
I shall so totally fav and hug this

Zero

I lurve the poem fun-chan!
It was wonderful.
You should be like a poet or something. lol
err....i like the one you submitted better. Cause there's like only 3 colors. Simplicity at its best you could say. But that's just me. lol
Okay. Good luck to you Fun-chan! Just do your best and then it won't really matter if there's little brats. lol
Happy Halloween to you too!

Oooh, i love the 2nd version alot, it has lots of motion/effect and feel, and this looks very still and suspenceful :3 I think it is a beautiful poem and art :D heehee, bloood XDDD
I love the "you may now kill the bride" part XD very creative.
keep up the great work fun-chan! X3 *hugs*
and good luck on the tournament! I'm sure ull do well!!! *hugs*

Wow that is an awesome poem.X3
I think the picture looks really awesome!^^
....that reminds me of the corpse bride.X3
I dont think the color looks bad at all, i love the red blood.(yay anime blood!!, yeah i know thats weirdXD)
Good luck in ur turnorment!(sp bad right?XD)
Im sure you guys will do fine.^^

Rai-chan

This looks really awesome! :D
I think the colored one looks better. My sister agrees, too.
And she thinks that this is more of a funeral instead of a wedding even if the groom is supposedly getting married to the bride. =X
Anyway, very good job with this. =]
I like it! =D

Oh wow, this is amazeing! I personaly like the second version better, i think that effect looks cool 8D Either way, this is just plain amazing in both versions *Hugs and favs*